Friday, June 19, 2015

           The biosphere Another world , I can't live there because in biosphere doesn't has a air , oxygen , gravity and food. If I live on Mars I can't sty 1 or 2 months because the food and oxygen maybe I missed. If you want make food you should get a oxygen. The earth has oxygen,air,gravity and food. The human lives in earth because he/she get everything. Unfortunately some people think in mars has human or Strange objects live there . In conclusion, there are many cases to human lives in biosphere on mars . 

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  1. Hamed,
    You don't have enough information. You don't have a topic sentence. You don't have main ideas or supporting ideas.

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